Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Summary

Dunring the Japanese occupation, nobody puts on air or grace in prison. There were many different races with many different customs and religions, but there were no social distinctions. They showered together daily. The four hundred of us would gather uvder a long water pipe punched full of holes and with a piece of soap in our hands, we would wait for the water to be turned on. The water would flow for a short while then it would be turned off. Once it started again, everyone would be madly busy, scrubbing their emaciated bodies with pieces of rag cut out from gunnysacks. The Japanese were ominous policies of the Japanese was the wartime exploitation of women who provided sexual services and emotional outlet to relive the combat tension. Since the fateful day,we never saw my sister again and till today, i live in extreme revulsion towards the Japanese. The direction of the Japanese Imperial Palace in Tokyo to pay respects to the Japanese emperor Also known as Tenchyo Setsu, was celebrated from a simple acknowledgment of the day to elaborate and colourful parades.

1 Comments:

Blogger THE SCRIBE said...

184 words. That is WAY TOO MANY! Your very first word is already mis-spelled. Did you proofread what you wrote before posting it? Also, did you use your summary skills of selection, reduction, paraphrasing and reorganising? I see you copying most of the sentences word-for-word (that is why you exceeded the number of words easily). Last but not least, did you actually read the summary question in your English book? This is not how you should begin the summary. Please check the blue book for more details. You need to put in more effort than this!

May 5, 2010 at 10:35 PM  

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